Shame on Eric and Annie.

Telling Robbie they think of him as another member of their family, then it's like he never existed four years later :

(I have criticism, but that'd be absolutely useless. This is 7 years old!)

The story is good but your mihgt want to reformate and then repost the last chpater. Right now it is very difficyult to read.

that was really good- i could picture it. u might wanna fix ch. 6 though (it's all together, no paragraphs)

good story, it weas intriguing and had excellent dialougue, i could totally imagine most of teh conversations that went on the story happening on 7th heaven!

Great story. You reflect Ruthie's sadness well.