|Reviews for Truths & Lies|
| Ella Press 5/3/12 . chapter 1
Wow, loved it! So sexy, I love this couple.
I'd only watch it when you write your dialogue tags. When you make a character speak, you immediately write He did/said/grunted/etc after the dialogue and it can get repetitive. Use more periods, and pauses.
| Wetterfrosch 12/20/11 . chapter 1
let's get peter and olivia some handcuffs!
| angellcakes23 12/18/11 . chapter 1
hot! I WISH this happened on-screen! lol
| butterflybby 12/18/11 . chapter 1
That was hot! Too bad it didn't go further... ;)
| ab89us 12/18/11 . chapter 1
I remember reading this when you first wrote it...Still love it.
| mara lena 12/18/11 . chapter 1
thank you for sharing this one! it was much needed and i liked your way of story-telling, as always ;) really miss that light-hearted bantering. my favourite line: "I'm not sure I really stood a chance at resisting you from the moment we met." love the implications.
could you have a look on your hard drive, maybe there's more to find?
btw, good to see you're back! :)