Wow, loved it! So sexy, I love this couple.

I'd only watch it when you write your dialogue tags. When you make a character speak, you immediately write He did/said/grunted/etc after the dialogue and it can get repetitive. Use more periods, and pauses.

awesome *_*

let's get peter and olivia some handcuffs!

hot! I WISH this happened on-screen! lol

That was hot! Too bad it didn't go further... ;)

I remember reading this when you first wrote it...Still love it.

thank you for sharing this one! it was much needed and i liked your way of story-telling, as always ;) really miss that light-hearted bantering. my favourite line: "I'm not sure I really stood a chance at resisting you from the moment we met." love the implications.

could you have a look on your hard drive, maybe there's more to find?

btw, good to see you're back! :)