I feel really sorry for Jen,it was sosad I almost cried. Oh yeah, MK's ship is called the Halberd, not the Halbird. Excuse me for noticing freaking tiny-ass errors. :P

Aurastar2327- I can't say to much without spoiling sorry :P (also remember those dead people for a much later chapter, then use your imagination, you can find out who those dead people are with some minor thought) Gald to hear you like the story!

Le me imagining puffballs waltzing Major crackup I love the story so far, but can't remember the other puff, other than Shadows. Also, please tell me that the dead people weren't MK and Kirby.

Aurastar2327- Glad to see you like this story so far! If you read to the end and seem to want more then please check out my Q/A fan fic, also the squeal that will come out sometime later on this year, not to sure when yet :P!

Great so far! Also, curse you Richard, now I'm gonna dream of talking high trees trying to steal my soul, munchkin overlords, and Kirby with guns. - REALLY BAD IDEA

53 whole chapters? Sweet mother of NOVA, this is a behemoth! Obiously, you put a buttload of effort in this, and I have a good feeling about this story. Thank you. * applauds*

Just a heads up guys this story is ending this weekend
But don't worry because I am making a sequal
It will be up sometime late this month or early next month I believe
However to people who have accounts
If you want to PM me an OC (PMing OC's are not breaking rules, putting them in reviews are, sorry non members!) to use as a minor role you can send me people if you want to
Also I might be spoiling some things in the up comming Q/A Kirby: The Mirror Warriors fan fic, so if you are currious about it you can find out more there

Wow! So many chapters with so much awesomeness! Jon, I even wonder where you get all of that energy from... where do you get it from?

Oh, yeah... I'm also making stories as well (I just can't keep it a secret NO MORE). Well, one about 3 oc's me and my sister made for PPG or PPGz.
And another one for the Kirby series, although it's gonna take a lingering while... I'm still gonna try to finish it! (I say... it's gonna have over 100 chapters... with so many words.) Also, my Kirby story will have so much big vocabulary words and rarely any saids.

But still... it will be such a riveting story! Maybe I'll go post it in the future! (If I have a Fanfiction account...)

Yet I really enjoyed your story! Keep it up!

please update this fic with a new chapter i cant wait to see what happens next

You were losing... to friggin Whispy?

Ude. In all the universe only one other Kabu responded. You want him to look for four more?

It's Marx! Oh wait... Marx does not have any arms... and is a lavender color... Hmmmmm... Jackson... HIT HIM AGAIN.

Really? Cause I know.

What about me? Van Kabu send me one too? 8D

Richard... you dunder head.