|Reviews for A Sage Among Wizards|
| fgrr 5/21/13 . chapter 10
great story, please continue
| toolazytologin 5/19/13 . chapter 10
I am certainly enjoying this story so far, and anticipate the Harry's first lesson with Snape very much. I also like what you have done with the Potterverse characters; they are all realistic, interesting, and cannon. I especially love how you've portrayed Dumbledore and Hermione. I also appreciate the thought and revelations about the wizarding world put in to this story, the parallels being drawn, and the relations between the Ninja world and the Potterverse. If I could make a suggestion, it would be to delve deeper into the secrets of Hogwarts (Chamber of Secrets and Room of Requirments), and an explanation for Hogwart's nature energy. Perhaps the Hogwarts grounds being the remnants of Mount Myzobykan (sorry can't spell it), maybe Toad-like ruins being found underground? I don't know. No matter where you decide to go with this story, I will be interested in its development, and I shall await your next chapter.
| Jackie Chun 5/18/13 . chapter 2
I love your story please do update
| Dirty-Nat1989 5/18/13 . chapter 10
Hope the next chapter out soon
| Kuroi In a Black Hole 5/18/13 . chapter 10
Awesome awesome story! I like how you insert explanations here an there for certain things and how his problems with Chakra also reflect in his magic use. I would love to see some of the class interactions, though I suppose the Snape class will have some wonderful moments. McGonagall's class gave me reason to practice my silent laughing technique as it is far too early for anyone to be awoken my my guffaws of laughter. This whole story is,, on many levels, surprising in clever ways and hysterically amusing. i like that I can see Naruto in Harry an that he is Naruto, with almost no development of the soul that was meant to be there.
I was contemplating whether Harry did actually die and the remnants of his soul were absorbed when Naruto merged with his boy so there wasn't any Harry left. Or if Naruto did really just replace a toddler's soul with his own massively larger one...hmmm..
Anyway, love the story, look forward to reading more!
| winterzstorm 5/16/13 . chapter 10
For an over-powered Harry story this one is actually believable and funny and not an instant super Harry. Can't wait for more
| tyog56 5/15/13 . chapter 10
Awesome Story! Update soon...
| ImEvol 5/14/13 . chapter 10
Really great story. The way you made Harry/Naruto's personality is great. Word of advice though, you should add a bit more to Harry's actions. By that, I mean that you should just briefly mention him training or doing his regular whatever to keep in shape. I also think Winny should be the matching pair for Harry. I have no idea why but I like that pairing... Well anyways, great story, hope it stays strong and turns out well. I'll be looking out for this story XD
| eyann85 5/13/13 . chapter 10
So so awesome ... I do so love the melding of the characters ... I know it's far away but I'm kinda hoping for a Harry/Luna Pairing 'cause together they just fit more so then Harry/Ginny anyway (cause seriously obvious that relationship was based on Love Potions) ,,,, anyway hoping for more soon!
| Secretive Rebel 5/12/13 . chapter 10
I like the way you seem to be planning out the characters in the story! The author's notes at the end definitely give a lot of insight on the very cliche fanfiction (which while occasionally can be interesting reads, do get annoying) trends that you are avoiding (quite well too, as far as I can tell). I'd just like to remind you that a few chapters ago you wrote something about "telling a few select people that Harry Potter withdrew his trust vault money" or something along those lines, but the repercussions of that act as well as any other goblin retaliation have yet to be seen. I realize that it is only the first day of class in the timeline, but I'd like to see some development/interaction that is inter-location and not solely within Hogwarts. (Of course Griphook could just be ridiculously cunning and you haven't told us some massive goblin revenge plot, in which case feel free to disregard the majority of this block of text).
Short Version: I liked it, but please be careful that you don't focus solely on within-Hogwarts interactions.
| Dimensionist 5/10/13 . chapter 6
Glad to hear this fic won't involve bashing - too many fics are ruined because of that.
I do hope you'll try to portray Ron in a more positive light than what you implied, however - he is, after all, loyal (when not blinded by his jealousy) - enough that he overcomes the temptation provided by a Horcrux playing on his insecurities to still stay with his friends, and also to charge off into danger to help a friend. By all indications, he's also someone who's generally fun to be around, if not particularly helpful in terms of studies.
You don't need to treat him specially - just treat him like he was in canon, if you could?
| Dimensionist 5/10/13 . chapter 5
Definitely fun to read, that wand part. Keep it up.
| Kat1132 5/10/13 . chapter 10
I really am enjoying this story. You have an interesting way of telling the story in that you seem very focused on the details, particularly why one technique is theoretically better than another. It can get a little tough to read through at times, but over all I like that you've obviously put so much thought into it. I also enjoyed your take on some of the fandom cliches, like the goblins and the sorting hat. They made me examine the Harry Potter world in a way I haven't been.
This is an excellent story. I can't wait to see what Harry thinks of the "dangerous tasks". Will he be able to solve them on his own? Will he do it earlier than in canon? He doesn't seem to have much interest in chess yet, so if you're going to exclude Ron on the adventure, then you might want to add something about that. (You might have aleady, just offering suggestions. You're story's been pretty flawless as far as I can tell by way of plotholes.)
Please update again soon. :)
| Guest 5/8/13 . chapter 10
Honestly i love it. every once in a while i really like reading a story where harry or naruto is just so overpowered its funny. Great job on the Cerberus part that was amazing. Keep up the good work.
| Guest 5/7/13 . chapter 10
So, when's the next update?