|Reviews for Doki Doki Temptation!|
| CloudEnvyKunoichi 12/31/11 . chapter 1
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next one oh and while I was reading I noticed this sentence: "I didn't want to -actually I did- want to betray their wishes on becoming a doctor,"
When you put in the '-actually I did-' you put want to twice, once before and after, I suggest the sentence be like this: "I didn't want to -actually I did- betray their wishes on becoming a doctor,"
Sorry it's my grammar side kicking in, my friend engraves every correction she has to make on my stories into my head ' hope you don't mind, well until the next chapter XD