Sweet and hot all at the same time, good job.

Oh my! I love this side of Carlisle, Dominant and possessive. Great work.

Definitely a different (and hot!) side of Carlisle. Edward cracked me up with his taunting.

there was much flailing about this on twitter this afternoon, and i realized i hadn't read it yet. perhaps not something to read at work, but oh my, definitely going in the favorites pile. jesus christ, woman. you are amazing. -b

This was absolutely fantastic. I'm at a loss for words to form a more eloquent review than that. Loved every shred of it.

Gah! This is gorgeous! Perfect vampslash Carlward. Perfect. Possessive, needy, bossy, pushy, but still loving throughout. I LOVED the thought/whispered conversation at the hospital. Really the whole hospital sequence in front of Bella was perfect.

I don't even have any more words. I just... it was perfect.

Possessive!Carlisle! Just the way I like him. I really loved it-Edward using Bella to provoke Carlisle, the mindreading. Fantastic fill. Thank you!

:)

So visceral. So wonderful when I can read about how when you follow your instinct and natural reaction that the partner can pull out the feelings and bring you back to you by attacking those same reactions. Never really thought about it that way. Love the facade and acting and only being themselves, natural selfs at the end of the day after the facade is complete and the story continues. Stunning.

awwww, that is so cute. It is always a little possessive good when they play it like this lol. but when it gets bad no no no

Mmm...nom diddly nommy nom.

I LOVED this! The weaving in of the canon story was fantastic. So, so good. Loved seeing Carlisle a bit unhinged, particularly when Edward kept on calling him "old man". Hilarious (and hot!)

Delightfully intense.

Fabulous. Amazing writing, I loved every word.

Nancy

I loved it.

Thanks for sharing.