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AnNaLeE m O'bRiEn 5/30/12 . chapter 9
Love it update whenever
Kyameron 5/29/12 . chapter 9
I just want to say, in regards to your AN at the bottom about Jacob, I didn't mind him in Twilight but in all three others he just bothered me. I haven't seen the movies just read the books so I don't understand the bit about the actor, But I think what I really liked about your reading stories is that it put into words what was bothering me about him. I actually really appreciate that. Thank you.
laurieglory 5/29/12 . chapter 9
Amazing writing as usual! Your insight into each character is meaningful and add alot to the storyline. Story is progressing sooooo well! can't wait to see how this is going to turn out :)
rockingal8 5/28/12 . chapter 9
I absolutely love this story. I think your a fantastic writer and I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up!
Belle 5/27/12 . chapter 9
Love it!
xEH1999 5/26/12 . chapter 9
Loved this chapter xxxx Please keep updating! xx
stephi910 5/26/12 . chapter 9
love what you said in the a/n about their daughter seeing the world and growing up before any imprinting happens, if at all...always annoyed me that jacob had a claim on their child before bella was even able to hold her.
missionarycook 5/25/12 . chapter 9
awesome chapter, although i've come to expect nothing less from your writing. I love that we think so much alike in our views of Jacob and Imprinting. I love how the story is taking shape and loved hearing from Charlie! I love getting the updates on your facebook status. can't wait to see what's up Edward's sleeve. anyway. thanks for the great chapter and i look forward to the next.
smileyluvstwilight 5/25/12 . chapter 9
LOVED THIS CHAPTER!

please update ASAP! Been a huge fan if your fanfiction's from the beginning and they have been getting better and better. I love the way you portray all the characters:D
Mrs.LissaOzera 5/24/12 . chapter 9
I agree with you love should not be forced, I like the way you are writing your story.
Nellybean0710 5/24/12 . chapter 9
I love it, I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work. I hope everything goes good for you. I will be watching for more chapters.
carey1090 5/24/12 . chapter 9
Great chapter.
BB Masen-Cullen 5/24/12 . chapter 9
First of all Good Luck with your surgery! Hope all goes well! I Looved that chapter! I can't wait for more and to see how everything pans out! I love Edward and Bella's moments and time together aswell! Can't wait till next chapter!
Ana Cecilia 5/23/12 . chapter 9
hi gailerina I hope everything is fine with your surgery.

Edward thought their biggest worry would be their classmates but I agree with you I think the pack have just started to move. Theyll be their biggest worry. The Cullens and Bella will need to be very careful because Charlie (perceptive as ever) is already trying to put to puzzle together. Im dying to read how youll come with that solution. And what is Edward up to? Maybe a propose? :)

As always I cant wait for your next post. Take care of you, OK?
darthjanis 5/23/12 . chapter 1
Hello,

firstly I want to mention that my native language isn't english, so please do not feel insulted if I make too many mistakes in my review. It was not because I wasn't paying attention I simply do not know better...

I got here because some one was translating a simalar story with the cullens reading the books into german. And so this site got my attention and I searched for others stories on this topic because the other story did not satisfy me - and found yours.

I really think you did an amazing job discribing how the Cullens and Bella read the books. Compared to the other stories I read on that topic, I really feel that here was put a lot of thought into the reactions of the different characters. Hence I really enjoyed reading the 3 stories you wrote on reading the books. This hiding-under-a-planket-stuff was just too funny or Alice slapping Edward because she "saw" Bella wanting to do it. The acronym ROFL could never have been more true :) I also could identify myself with ur opinion on the serious stuff like Rosalie, Jakob or Victoria.

So naturally I went on to read what your imagination is going to put in the way of Bellas and Edwards happyness and of course I'm curious what is going to happen with Rosalie and the Baby-issue or how Jake will be dealt with and last but not least if their might show up a Volturi ;)

As a guy I am neither camp Edward or camp Jocob, but I agree to your thougths on the pup. Never really liked him anyway :) By the way Alice is my favorite so I'm hoping she'll get more envolved in the story then she already is.

And regarding one of your notes: I too can not understand how some people think that Jake will have a shot at Bellas heart after having read your first 3 stories... Imho u made it quite clear that there will be no love-triangle what so ever. The question is simply not if Bella and Edward will be happily together just how and what problems they will have to master.

I'm really looking forward to read more from you. An other thing I love is how u manage to get all those side characters like Jessica or Lauren into your story. As I'm recalling it right now: Emmetts pay-back was just another ROFL-Momnet :)

So basically I just wanted to praise your story and say: keep up the good work.

A new fan of yours

Janis
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