Thanks for such entertaining chapters, hope you could write more.

Interesting story and well written.

Thank you.

Sorry it took so long to review. Good job.

No the time jumps are not confusing since you label them well with time and place. I am loving Nikko and Vincent. You have me wondering who it was Nikko saw. Great job. Keep it up.

Another good chapter. I love Nikko and Vincent, but I am wondering how long it is going to take Vincent or Solomon to figure out what is going on with him.

I was wondering what was going on with Nikko. I just adore Nikko and Vincent. Somehow I think there maybe a little trouble brewing. Good job with the chapter.

another good chapter. I think Vincent is going to have some explaining to do.

Another good one. Am I remembering correctly that the benefactor for Veritas has the same last name (de Molay)? Is Vincent the same as brother Vincente? Looking forward to reading more. Also just a general question based on the series Nikko apparently had some kind of power (the thing with the can in the last episode). Does he still have that here?

great

I was pleasantly surprised to get an e-mail for the update so I just had to come read it. Great job. Poor Vincent. I could really see him thinking that. I think I forgot to ask how long after the series ends does this story take place. Just so I have an idea. You might have said already and I just forgot but I was just curious. Anyways good chapter. I can't wait to see how Vincent gets out of this one and where the story is going.

I just checked this section to see if anything new had been added and stumbled across this. Great start. I loved this show, and I really wish there were more stories out there. I have added to alerts so I won't miss an update since I don't usually check here that often. I had to laugh at the Mummy reference with Arnold's character. Good job, update soon.