|Reviews for Last Train for Christmas Eve|
| RWBYWolf 3/29/13 . chapter 1
WAFF. Warm and Fuzzy Feeling. Just WAFF
| Ding 2/6/13 . chapter 1
Oh this story is beyond cute! I love how you described every thing, your writing style flowed so wonderfully! Please write more Sly Cooper story's, chow!
| Nicki Fowl 1/29/13 . chapter 1
Great story here. Granted, yes, some people might complain about the lack of detail, but you have JUST the right amount for this story to allow people to think freely about things. It gives them room to interpret it in their own way and give greater appeal.
I suppose that's a secret to a good story; balance between detail and free imagination. Well, still a great story, definitely a favorite, and Pen, you DO realize you included yourself in your insult right?
Hiora: I don't think so.
Me: Hush! I'm trying to guilt-trip someone here!
| NinjaxSketcheartx 10/23/12 . chapter 1
Aww, this is so sweet. I love how you had Carm and Sly exchange gifts. And the fact that they're still children makes this one-shot even sweeter.
| Gegi789 9/24/12 . chapter 1
really sad about sly. anyway it was well written.
| ForeverFreelancer 6/25/12 . chapter 1
I know what you're thinking: a reviewer of this story?
Well I happened to be poking around the favorite stories a friend of mine collected, and came across this gem.
This is beautifully written. You say it lacks detail; I disagree, it's one of the most well written Sly Cooper one-shots I've ever read. The exchange of gifts has so much meaning behind it, and Carmelita's sadness about Sly going to an orphanage on Christmas actually hit me with a pang of sadness.
I also love the banter between the pen and the sword at the end! Very nice piece, well done. :)
| Versia Aremis 4/23/12 . chapter 1
Lies! Not good is the lie of the year! You should think about continuing this! not keeping it one-shot...y?
| claymade 2/29/12 . chapter 1
Awwwww! So cute!
A very heartwarming a fluffy read; I enjoyed it immensely!
| Tempest of Reach 2/1/12 . chapter 1
Very nice. Bit late in reading it but a very nice and cute story
| Hookemhorns12 12/20/11 . chapter 1
| Zero612 12/19/11 . chapter 1
Y u such a downer Pen?
Aw well, Feliz Navidades everyone!
| Ellethwen Celtica 12/19/11 . chapter 1
This was such an amazing, beautiful, cute, happy, and sad story. Thank you very much for sharing it with us, and a very Merry Christmas to you!