 brionyjae 3/9/12 . chapter 23*sighs happily* What a perfect finish to the story. The team are all in their rightful places :) That moment between Jack and Ianto was far too sweet, I seriously almost teared up. Extra touching because of the time period restrictions. I can just imagine them being one of those old couples nowadays finally being able to marry. Awwww! I actually like the place where Owen and Tosh are at now - it suits them, to be friends after all they've gone through in this story. Leaves their future open. Gosh, you know that of course I'd enjoy any more stories in this universe, but if you did decide to stop here, I think I'd be content with the place they're all at. However, it *would* be nice to have more adventures ;) Epic story, lovely ending - you deserve some cookies! *sends over a basket* xx |
 brionyjae 3/8/12 . chapter 22Gosh, I wonder if Mr Sato has been talking to the gang about what I *think* he's been talking about... how exciting! _ I'm glad Gwen got some action too, she's good at that sort of stuff. AAHHH the UNIT beret! *grins madly* Too much epic... ;) |
 brionyjae 3/7/12 . chapter 21*bursts into applause* Lovely speeches! Awwww, I can't believe I'm almost at the end... eeep! This chapter was just so charming - my favourite part was definitely the canoodling between Jack and Ianto in the Hub *giggles* OH and the line from Jack about Suzie's flowers - trust him not to know, hahaa. Love it. And Ianto seeing through Jack's file excuse... n'awwww. They really are perfect for each other *sighs happily* And Rhys and Gwen! Look, you've given me warm fuzzies with this chapter _ |
 brionyjae 3/7/12 . chapter 20Hehee, you're so clever! That little comment about predicting the Rift...! :D And destroying the pendant. I love the way you've used canon whilst changing it to suit your situation perfectly :) And the technology being less advanced in 1969, you've nailed it! |
 brionyjae 3/6/12 . chapter 19Aaaahhh, best chapter yet! So epic to see all the gang in their 'proper' roles at last! :D And, best of all, Rhys is let in too! *bounces* So glad that he could prove to Gwen that he wasn't boring ;) And I was mentally punching the air at Tosh's genius. Love it! |
 brionyjae 3/5/12 . chapter 18Ohhhh! I *should* have guessed - it crossed my mind when I first saw the name Alex amongst the Torchwood staff - but somehow, you lured me into a false sense of security ;) All credit to you, of course! :D I'm liking the extra twist of having all the gang there though - can't wait to see what happens NOW! |
 brionyjae 3/3/12 . chapter 17Delightful chapter! Perfect reading to go with my lazy Sunday breakfast ;) That wee sidenote about the moon was pretty cool, I can only imagine what it would have been like! Ianto getting cornered by an old school teacher made me giggle - I know the feeling xD Gosh, and back to the Hub? I should have known it wouldn't all be smooth sailing! Love it! xx |
 brionyjae 2/26/12 . chapter 16Wow, I'm also very impressed with Ianto and Rhi's civility! Was pretty nice to see :) And Gwen! Gosh, like her, I could kind of guess that it was coming, but it was a brilliant surprise! I wonder what she'll do...! One more thing that I absolutely adored - Ianto's CUTE daydreaming about him and Jack being literature and history heroes! SO ADORABLE! xD Nice little detail. Brilliant work! |
 brionyjae 2/25/12 . chapter 15Yay, the group dynamic is slowly getting back to normal :) I reckon your explanation for Jack's thoughts was really clever - psychic tests, that makes a lot of sense! :) This is a minor detail, but that brunch they had - yummmmm! Very jealous ;) Perhaps I should treat myself... awesome chapter! New Year's sounds like it should be fun :D |
 brionyjae 2/23/12 . chapter 14Jack's story that he told Gwen and Rhys was PRICELESS :D Almost wished it had happened, hehee. However, I like the reality much better - especially the adorable moment at the end, between Tosh and Owen. I guess the plus side of them both having lost someone they loved is that they now have something new to bond over :) Which is always good! :D And, of course, I squeed over Jack and Ianto's cuddle - n'awwww! xx |
 brionyjae 2/21/12 . chapter 13Very thrilling! I enjoyed the way you included Suzie and the rest of her team, made for some interesting extra dynamics. I almost forgot there's no retcon back in these days! Now... I wonder what the end half of the story will bring! (and gosh, I'm dying with curiosity about how you're going to explain Jack's unreadable thoughts! :D) |
 brionyjae 2/21/12 . chapter 12Oooohhh, Tosh and Owen are IN! :D Very exciting indeed! I love the way Ianto's been thrust into helping at the Hub too. Poor Gwen... :P I must admit, I'm looking forward to seeing how you may or may not use canon for this situation... and what will Owen do! :) |
 Keyxi 2/21/12 . chapter 23Wow, second semester started and I missed so much. I'm glad everything worked out for them, although I'm sad it's over. I enjoy this series so much, please write another one :) |
 LilFerret79 2/21/12 . chapter 23Yay! What a wonderful ending to an awesome story! |
 BookJunkie007 2/20/12 . chapter 23I love these characters and would love to see them again. Maybe a look at Tosh's graduation and her first days at Torchwood officially? I would be happy with whatever you write though. |