Peter should get too close to Hook during a fight, then later in the chapter, he goes to Hook and demands answers to what they are too each other. Then he should spend the night with Hook :)

I like this please continue :)

Well, I'm not sure if it would help much, seeing as how it appears you plan on making this a Peter/Jim story, but you could always have an instance where Peter asks James about his mother, or father (though that might be a bit of a beserk button for James), or ask why he ever decided to take care of him, because what debt did he ever owe Peter's mother, if she was the one to marry someone else and kick the bucket?

Hopefully that will help.

Totally waiting for the next chapter! Good job! D

I Loved this. I like to think that Jimmy still cares for Peter. I am all for another chaoter, esspecially one which is slash. Xx

Oh you must continue this!

It sounds like it's going to make an interesting read! When I watched Neverland, the ending left me feeling so sad! I mean, the bond between Peter and Jimmy was... well, it never should have ended like that.

So it was nice that someone would actually write a story like this, I think many people don't want to see those two remain enemies.

Anyway, looking forward to the next chappie!

please post more, has great potential. so good! :)

This was an awesome start. Love it so far. Please update soon!

This a great start to what could be an awesome story! It has certainly motivated me to write my own story about Peter and Jimmy. I hope you do continue this story some day, I would certainly like to read more!

you should continue this... I've always thought Hook & Peter had a little more then a 'Father/son' thing going...

i don't know...

I hope you haven't abandoned this

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I really loved. There is not alot of stories about this movie. It's really quite sad. I hope you continue this great story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I really loved your first chapter and I hope you update soon. I just found Neverland and fell in love with the relationship between Jimmy and Peter, and so I'm really looking forward to see where you go with this piece. :)

I'm looking forward to seeing where you're going with this story. There's a lot the two of them need to work out before Peter could manage to trust Jimmy in a relationship, so I'm curious to see how you'll handle things. :)

Also, the Jimmy/Peter vibes were jumping out at me the entire time I watched Neverland, so I'm glad to see there's already a story headed in the direction of that pairing. _

I think it would be awesome if this story was a romance. This was really good. I'd like it better if it was M rated if you know what I mean ;). Please update soon.

Nice to see something about the 2011 Neverland movie. It was really one of the only good things from Sci-Fi in a long time as most of their original pictures are pretty lame. Hopefully you'll write more. Now I'll have to start on my fic about Fox.