   Paula100 4/28/12 . chapter 2I feel like Elliot will hurt Olivia, he is married and lying, this is not good for Olivia
Post more, eager for more |
| Amy 4/27/12 . chapter 2 good story! |
| anon 4/27/12 . chapter 2 Aw he's married ?
But why |
| anon 4/27/12 . chapter 1 Except for the parts where it sounds like you have endorsement deals it's awesome keep the chapters coming:) |
| Dude 4/27/12 . chapter 1 Wow you've got some serious product placement going on in this story. Converse? Honda Civic? Aqua Net? Plus all the band names? Other than that, it's good. |
| Dude 4/27/12 . chapter 1 Wow you've got some serious product placement going on in this story. Converse? Honda Civic? Aqua Net? Plus all the band names? Other than that, it's good. |
| tanya2byour21 12/19/11 . chapter 1 I like the start of this and I can't wait to find out what is going to happen next. Keep up the great writing and please post more soon.
Tanya |
| Hutch917 12/19/11 . chapter 1 Great start. I really like the stories when they are younger. |
| Lauren Puddingcupsandlollipops 12/19/11 . chapter 1 I love this story already. I hope you update soon! |
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