Please update "This Kiss"

Everclear will never rot your brain. However, I guess I'll never know why everyone picks 'Wonderful' to use in songfics. *sighs and begins handing out copies of songs like 'Pale Green Stars', 'Why I Don't Believe In God', and 'Misery Whip'* Or maybe I'm just astoundingly cynical and tired.

Very good ficcie, but it seems more like a vid-fic than a song-fic to me...Maybe it's just the insomnia...Good job!

It almost made me cry. ALMOST. And that's a big almost, It's good though...

Wow... weird and incredible at the same time. This was... this was so RIGHT! I so wish this was a music video; I would watch it again and again and again and again. The descriptions on what they would do and who they would become are surprisingly accurate. Very good job!

ok i have seen Gundam but mi got curious since this is one my fave songs _ its amazing! *throws confetti in the air*

Great Story. I don't know the song but the story and the lyrics mesh together perfectly. Depressing, but then life isn't always happy. But without depressing times, would we really cherish the happy ones?

WOW! That was just wow. I was told you were HY/RP by Axisor. I expected happy mush but nooooo. This was depressing. I love that song. I love this fic. I give you permission to be depressing. I really enjoyed reading this. It was exceptional! keep up the fantastic work! :)

*glomp* That was (for lack of better word) wonderful! I love that song, I love the Gundam pilots, so it works lovely! I loved it!

COOL! that was so cool- I don't normally read a songfic and didn't relize that was exactly what it was until I had commited myself but that was cool- and the song is just perfect (i love that song, too.) :þ

Wow, that was really good! I usually steer clear of vid-fics, but this was so well done, I could easily visualize the scenes. I love the song too and now I want to hear it but I don't have the cd. All your fault! :) But now you have to write something where everything really is wonderful. Humor us! :)

Sort of depressing, but good. One of my friends loves Everclear, so I've been familiar with it for a while...against my will. I liked the fic very much.

Woundeful story. Please continue.

I luved it. This is definatly a new way to look how the boys feel. Great job!

That was a really good story, really sad too ( Poor peoples.