Good chapter, good action, I'm glad you updated, but two small things. Mandy's blonde and Blackie's a boy.

What took you so long?

This is as amazing as ever, love the subtle humour in among the tension. Please update soon. I want to know if she recovers.

And what was James thinking, they wouldn't be worried? She never made it home, of course they'll be worried...

UPDATE SOON. PLEASE?!

G4E

This is amazing. I've got shivers running up and down my spine. He'd better save her. Hurry up and update this, it is brilliant. I love it. D Keep writing

DON'T LET IT END NOW GOD DAMMIT!(Dear lord, forgive me,)WHAT THE HELLABIT HAPPENS NEXT! Write more soon, please?