 pericles.brow 12/24/11 . chapter 1I loved this! Normally I don't read much of PruCan but this story was too good and the writing was great, as always. The way you portrayed them was adorable yet realistic! :) |
 MakenshiCrona 12/20/11 . chapter 1This is so beautifully written, I can't wait to see it when you post the actual story! :3 |
 hetafan 12/20/11 . chapter 1Yes, yes, this AU is finally beginning! :D I read you were thinking about writing a high school story and couldn't be happier, I love those! The way you wrote Gilbert and Matthew is just... perfect! Not overly fluffy but still sweet. Can't wait to read more :D |
 Jenna 12/20/11 . chapter 1 This was soo good! I love the way you write Gilbert, I mean, he's still awesome but in a more realistic way and all... I'd love to read that other story too :D
Damn, reading your stories makes me want to finally create an account here xD |
 AkaiShinda 12/20/11 . chapter 1wow :D
You amazed me again. I like the psychological processes in your stories and how you introduce your characters. Through reading I was very glad that you kept Gil's personality as he was, not changing anything OOC. And of course Matt's reactions were totally like him, I felt very happy in the end. Now I have enough evergy to continue studying and...
Yes through reading I was thinking that you might want to continue this story, and in the end when I saw you're in the process of writing AU story, I started smiling. I know you'll do a great job because your writing style catches the reader and takes us inside the story. The narration technique you use is rather unique because we can feel and see what the character does but still we can be certain about the other person as well. You use a kind of stream-of-consciousness in a very good way.
Gratulations and I hope I'll have the opportunity to read the AU story of yours very soon. :)
Hugs
Akai |
 KumaCurry 12/19/11 . chapter 1That was beautiful and really sweet .
Great Job!
KumaCurry |