Greetings Aozorain I Liked Your Ending To FanFiction So Now I Am Going To Give You My Crushing Critique As People Always Call It Around Me Even If This Was Your Longest FanFiction To Date In My Point Of View It Was Not A Long One As You Call It You Did Not Write The Ending It Is Obvious To Your Readers That This Story Is NOT Finished So Pretty Please With Sugar On Top Complete It To Avoid Flames I Shall Look Forward To Your Future FanFictions And By The Way I Am Not Meaning To Hurt Feelings Or Your Pride As A Writer I Just Did Out Of Good Intentions So Do Not Feel Down On My Account And Good Luck Ironic Is It Not?That At First I Criticized Your Story And At The End I Am Trying To Cheer You Up Maybe If I Hurt Your Feelings

the end? how about the engagement! I hope you make one more chapter or a one shot for sequel...Takuto proposing Mitsuki...I want to see it! and that news will be the hottest news in the tabloid!

I like this story

do your best db

Hey Aozorain I Loved This Chapter It Was Enjoyable Reading It And So Cute For Izumi And Takuto And Mitsuki And Meroko To Finally Confront Each Other And Talk Things Out It Was Truly Touching And Admiring For Izumi And Takuto To Talk Their True Feeling Not Like Our Will Not Admit Their True Feeling Because They Are Afraid Of Maybe Giving Up The Pride And Honor Of Their Am I Right Or Wrong Please Answer Me In Your Next Chapter So Keep Doing Your Utmost Best And The Of Luck To You

awwww Mitsuki almost confessher feelings!

poor Meroko. I hope you can find the happiness.

update asap!

do your best db

Yayyy! You updated! Takuto loves Mitsuki. . Kyaaaa! Great chappie! :D update soon.

Emerald

Greetings I truly Liked The Update Of The Story I Thought It Was Enchanting Because Takuto Was Rushing To Mitsukis Side Like He Was Her Knight In Shining Armor So I Was Wondering Is This Romance FanFiction About Meroko And Takuto Or Takuto And Mitsuki And Izumi Is Left Alone Does He Not Have An Important Role In The Progress Of The FanFiction Well I Think He Is Overprotective Of His Precious Meroko Even Though He Is Not Willing To Admit It Is That Not So Aozorain? Well That Is Just How Males Are Right? I Can Not Wait To Read What You Will Write Next I Wish That You Have The Best Of Luck And A Huge Inspiration

This is cool!But when does meroko explain what really happened to takuto!The suspence!UPDATE!

Takuto saved Mitsuki again? So sweet! Anyway, this chappie was good, but also filled with emotions. Loved it. Update soon! :D

Emerald

Hello Aozorain I Loved The Story Very Much It Has A Very Interesting Plot So Hurry Up And Write The Sixth Chapter By The Way I Enjoyed Reading Your Story Every Second Of It To Be More Precise It Has A Special Sense Of Never Giving Up And A Sense Of Justice And Determination Well If You Believe What I Just Reviewed To You And Can You Do Me A Favor If You Wish And Write A FanFiction Love Story About Izumi And Meroko I Will Really Appreciate It If You Did Write It And I Will Anticipate Your Future Updates So I Wish You The Best Of Luck

Omg, Takuto your so protective xD. Loved the chapter. Update soon!

Emerald

I liked it. Alot. It has an interesting plot coming, and I can't wait to see whats next! :D

Emerald

P.S- if its manga pairings, its TakutoxMitsuki and MerokoXIzumi?

hello hello it's me again :D

and again, i wanna say that the chapter is awessooommmeee XD

glad that takuto is really kind to meroko, moreover give her his phone number *happy dance

but seems that takuto had a bad past memories T_T

hope that they'll get closer really soon :D

please update soon o

anyway, happy birthdaayyy!

may your wishes come true o

actually i prefer TakuMitsu couple than TakuMero couple, but your story is really really awesome \\o/

i've only read a few of TakuMero stories,and ur story is the best of all! XD

please update really really soon.. i'm curious to read wht happen next X3

anyway,good luck for ur exam and happy holiday :D