I am loving this story, and I am looking forward to the last chapter. I'm so glad to see you writing new Star Wars stories again.

My one teeny tiny quibble is that she might have at least tried to throw the bomb out the window. But I'm sure her solution will lead to a much more dramatic rescue and conclusion.

I hpe maladies dies a horrible death. Avenge padme!

Oh my gooodddneess... :P That was hot and then horrible! Not the writing, the act! ;P Stupid Malacore! Hope that Ani's alright.

You know what's sad? The last thing I thought of is, 'What about C-3P0 when the apartment exploded... That's just sad.

Omg, pleeeeaaasse update soon, I'm loving this story so much, can't wait to see what happens next!

Oh wow! Impressive

Interesting premise very different I do so love your Anakin and Padme stories.

What a wicked end to this chapter! Thanks for the quick update as this is a story that stays with you.

:D Hope that Dooku and Malacore die! :D Love Ani/Padmé scene. Was HOTT! :D -AJSK

This story is really great! You've got good ideas :-)

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Interesting AU premise! I can imagine things working out this way.

Wowwwww... nice curveball at the end!

Wow... That was a suprising twist there at the end. I loved this first chapter! Please write more!

Whoa! Interesting. So she's married? Only not to him! Hmmm...

WoW! :D Don't leave us hanging here! :D -AJSK

Oh, I did not see that ending coming! When I read the last two lines, I was like "What?"