you should explain more about the fanfic and give more details about things.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

brilliant hahaha

How very teasing.

I like it.

How completely strange, but well written:)

Right, lovely as usual. Ah, Severus is so fastidious.

This was amusing, but it does have potential. I'm not trying to flame you, but I wrote a parody that was somewhat similar to this. I like how Snape remained in character and wasn't all mushy.

*blink* this story sucks. sorry but it does.

keep trying