I really like your story so far. I enjoy it and I can't wait for next update!

this is quite good. really makes me remember when i played this game. also makes me regret lending it cause the person i lent it to lent it to someone else who lent it and so on and so on. nothing i can do about what's already been done. i had finished the game 2 or 3 times anyway. i'll be looking forward to reading the rest of this when you upload it.

I love a novellization of games, it's a most favourite thing to read for me! And when you mention Raguna's ocean blue eyes, i was imagine how beautiful Ragunas eyes! XD

I always love seeing novelizations of games. They're some of my favorite things to read. I just want to point out that in your description of Raguna, the brown part of his shirt isn't really part of his shirt. It's some sort of leather armor that goes on top of it. :)

This is a really great story, the way it is written is great and the way you included the storyline before the game begins is really good. Hopefully you will continue this - it makes a great read.

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