pretty good, except Lucia's name was slightly misspelled (don't worry, it's a common mistake). also, you skipped part of the lyrics in "legend of mermaid" (check youtube to see which part), and one word in the song was misspelled (again, see youtube). other than that, pretty darn good. can't wait to see what happens next!

please update soon. This story looks very promising,so please continue and not abandon this story like other writers do.. I'm sorry I did not mean to offend anyone