For some reason I kept laughing through this entire story. Some parts of it were sad, sure, but the hilarious bits... I love Lee. Can I have a Jareth clone -and- a Lee one to antagonise him and burst his ego when needed? Oh, and it's good to finally have that Big Question answered too. You see, when -I- played Jareth in a stage production I did have to stuff my pants, being a girl and all. Think brown sock with green LaCoste frogs.

I really enjoyed reading your story. You had the romance, excitment, adventure and betrayal in your plot. I really enjoyed what happened to Sarah's step mom. Couldn't have happen to a nicer person.

Thanks for sharing your plot.

this is a great story alot of time and effort must have gone into it well done

wow, nice start, you describe things really well. could you possibly send me the mp3 of that song? it sounds beautiful.

OVER ALL? GREAT STORY. I LOVED IT!

HE MESSED UP!HHAH!! THAT STUPID IDIOT.YEA NOW WHAT. THERE FINALLY IS SOME HOPE.THANK GOODNESS.NOW HE SHALL PERISH IN A GRAVE FILLED W/ ROTTEN PEACHES!COMPLIMENTS OF LONELY 27.NOW ON TO THE HAPPY ENDING!?

please let the GODS FAVOR THEM...

TO INTENSE

WHAT ARE FRIENDS FOR.^-~

KEEP FAITH. I WILL TRY

I NEED TO READ THE NEXTCH.

RITE THE WRONGS.IT'S STARTING TO LOOK BETTER. I REALLY LUV THE STORY

NO!WHATS THIS THEY ARESUPPOSED TO BE TOGETHER. PLEASE DON'T DO THIS. IT ISN'T RITE. HAVE MERCY

STOP TORTURING THEM...PLEASE...

YOU CAN'T LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!@!@#$%!.ICAN BE QUITE EMOTIONAL SOMETIMES.PLEASE FORGIVE.:( PLEASE JUST LET HIM REACH HER!(ROTTEN PEACHES FLYING FAST,DON'T LOOK UP!) SORRY AGIAN!:( LET NO BAD HAPPEN.


GREAT JOB.I CAN'T QUIT WORRYING AND IT'S NOT EVEN REALLY
MY PROBLEM.:)