wow this was such a great story! you had me on the edge of my seat i thought there would be no happy ending,but you surprised me very much! i loved how you wrapped everything up! the characters were great and easy to relate to!

YOU ARE A GREAT WRITER I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK!

KEEP ON WRITING 3

I'm sorry for my bad language but Fart boy is such an asshole. How dare he. I know this story is already comlete but I haven't finnished reading it yet and I hope fart boy gets a serious beating. But Jareth...(she has a dreamy gaze in her eyes)...aawwwww! He is awesome. Thank goodness he punched fart boy otherwise I would have imaged fart boy on my laptop screen and beaten it instead. Jareth just saved me having to spend money to buy another laptop. And i'm so proud of Sarah for having for once said what she truely felt at a time like this.

You are a fantastic writer and I hope you become successful in life by writing more stories cause you have a serious talent and by ignoring it you would be wronging everyone and stopping them from enjoying greatness

Luvvvv... me

Good chapter***

Good chapter again.

Good first chapter.

This was so wonderful! I'm so sorry it toke me a long time to review this story but wow...please keep writing stories! _

Hi. Please don't find what i'm about to say offensive. I'm just critiquing from one author to another. Well, neways...I know you've wrote this a long time ago, and you probably are an amazing writer currently, but the character of Sarah does not blend well with her age. With the way she is acting, she seems like a teenager. And especially since you mentioned she lives with her parents... for that age, she doesn't seem independent nor responsible (which someone her age should be). And since this is set waaaay in the future, I thought Sarah's character would be mature since the time in the labyrinth made her mature from the transition of childhood to adulthood.

...just saying.

A Lovely story fantastic I couldnt stop reading I read it all in one session! Look forward to reading more of your work :)

Absolutely a lovely story, I really enjoyed reading it.

Awesomeness. Truly.

Enjoyed the journey, thanks! :)

Such a clever explanation for those famous Jareth words..."I will be your slave."

Aww I just want to wrap him up and cuddle him. :(

But technically, Sarah didn't agree to be courted...did she? Just as friends? Hopefully that detail will help...

Sarah is an idiot.

I really don't like Fart Dart. LOL

I know Jareth can't even tell her about his 'entertaining' either because she will just think he's lying.

But maybe Hoggle can?

I adored this chapter. Best one so far. Hope that means that even better things are coming!

I am so happy with you for not having Dart come take care of her. He revealed his true colors. Let's hope Sarah realizes it too.

Waking up to those lovely mismatched eyes...oh this is going to be good *devilish laugh*