That was a great story man i loved it

I really liked this story *rubs sore eyes* I 've been reading since forever but it was worth it!

I can't believe what you did to Washu. She's my favorite character! Please don't kill her!

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Man, that chapter was long! That's why it's taken me so long to actually read it and give you a review! It was long, but well written and the story line is very interesting. I would love to read more right now, but I was up all night updating, and I'm about to fall asleep on the computer! Talk on Monday. Peace and Out.

I enjoyed that. Your fic was nicely written except for one thing, there's no such word as "puzzlement" in the english language! I'm sorry, had to get it out of my system, every time I saw it my right hand started to itch for my red-inked pen (I'm a teacher .) Anywayz, nice take on the Tenchi Universe. Let's just say it was...beliveable.

The end! I really liked this story, and the ending was quite twisty! Also noticed the Calvin and Hobbes tribute when Ryoko and Ryo-ohki were arguing, funny! The entire story was brilliantly done, and I can't see how you could put yourself down by saying your bad at writing. This has to be one of the best works I've read in a long time. I hope to see more in the future.

Until then, Solitary Confinement.

Alright, let the battle commence! What a twist, Washu was Anemone, her little form warped into a killing machine! You weren't lying when you said this was to satisfy your twisted dreams, but it it really good! Hope the last chapter ends this with the same excellence as the previous four!

Whoa, again another excellent chapter! Akima was really Ryoko under a false identity? Jeez, either I'm really slow or that was a good job of covering up her real name. With the exception of a slight bit of confusing parts, it was yet again an excellent work.

*rubs sore eyes* Each of these chapters seem long enough to be books in their own right! But I like long stories, so I hope the remaining chapters are as good as this one was.

Hello there. A very interesting story so far, it has taken a lot of twists and turns that I never expected. I guess that you've based this off the second season of Tenchi Muyo? Commendations for the excellent story, I hope the rest goes just as good as this one has.

nice story bit confusing but becuase i don't watch tenchi moyu

This is great! Don't kill Washu! Ryoko needs her mother!

Demented? You think this is DEMENTED? The hell not! How could you say that? I can't wait for the sequal, what did you dsay in that email? I think... 65 chapters? Hahaha, SO WHAT? Post it! Post it!

*speechless* it's not fair! how come anything i write is crappy? waaaaah! ANYWAYS, you wrote an excellent story! i absolutely loved it :) to anyone who disagrees with me, go stick your head in a public toilet! well, you have made a wonderful brainchild worthy of anyone's praise! VERY nice job! :) . _ :P

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Woa... it's been just a little while I'm reading TM! fics, and so far it was always of the same kind... with some exceptions. And your fic is a VERY good exception, a must-read rating I will put on it _

Really, very interesting plot, with a lot of emotions. It would be a shame if you decide to let it hang here... will Washu-chan stand another chance for living with her dearest daughter...

Keep the good work and as I repeat many time... HAVE FUN !

"!" PearlWind "!"