You've a very comfortable to read writing style, do you study English Lit simply out of interest?

This was really good! i love all the how we saw it through Tommy's eyes. And the parallel with last imagining of Tommy's to the last paragraph in the book. That last part made me want to cry so much, and really feel like they could have 'seen' each other somehow, if both had been able to let the imagining's continue.

and the part of him not thinking he could ever let her go... the feels...

thank you so much for writing this!

ow! That was great!

Wow that was really good! It's really cool the way you put it in Tommy's eyes!

I really enjoyed reading it :D I liked to hear Tommy's version of it all. Good Job :)