wow! i luv this story, so please write more soon. to be honest i hadnt even thought about waht happened to Diamanda(aka Lucy) after Lords Ladies. im also quite surprised that Pratchett didnt mention her in any later books, givn his tendency to re-use characters. all in all very good, i think your writing style is very well suited to this fandom. keep up the good work!

Great chapter. I haven't got around to reading Lords & Ladies yet, but now I might have to give it a go. I really enjoyed the chapter and I can't wait to see what happens to her in the 'big' city. Please update soon. _

I've actually been wondering what happened to Lucy, do continue this cos its very good and youre writing style is very close to Pratchetts. highly enoyable! SO update soon!

Let's see here... The style's nice and Pratchetty, especially the foot notes, so kudos there. Interesting choice for a main character. Oh, and (nitpicker hat on) it's Black 'Aliss' not Black 'Alice'. (nitpacker hat off) Overall, good show. I hope to see more of it posted soon.

You're a good writer, let's take that as read- but you've over looked, in using Diamanda, that her personality was of a 17 year old girl (I'm right, you're wrong). And although you've accounted for it in a way, it seems incongruitous with her already established personality. E.g. a level headed and sensible person capable of detecting the trick in a question would not have fallen for the easy route to sucess. I like it anyway but still. And, from the book, it seems more as if she didn't have the talent (rather the ridiculous notion that a lot of 17 year old girls do) to be a witch, but she did have the potential to become someone rich and sucessful.

Oh, and Magrat was the doctor who tended to her when she was in the coma, not Granny. And, was it just me, or did she black hair? (That one's possibly my imagination)

wow. really good. interestng style, love it. please get the next part out soon

Oh, I like this. I really like this. Please get the next chapter out soon.