LOVE IT! Amazing work as always. ]

i feel like this may be the happiest chapter we would get until much later

i may obviously be wrong about that lol

loving this story so far

good chapter. liked seeing the young and what their relationship is like. interesting to have characters that are a bit different

Great Chapter! It was adorable to see Alice and Bella interacting as children. And to see the roles kinda reversed for a change. Bella being girlie and Alice being more of a Tom-Boy! I love it! Kiddie Edward is awesome too! Can't wait for more!

I am so happy this story has finally gotten underway! I love both of your writing, so I am totally thrilled to read a joint endeavor! I am already in love. Thanks for writing and sharing.

Awww! Sweet! Alice just cracks me up. Different as it seems Esme and Carlisle are not the perfect parents. I'm always scared to start WIP as it's just sad when they don't get finished but I have read all your others and trust you so here I am. Esme saying Fuck was just too funny! Good start to their story and you can already feel Edwards protectiveness for Bella. You always write bad boy Edwards... Luv them. Bella seems really girly instead of Tom boyish, Alice is the rough Tom boy here, could be a lot of fun as they get older. I'm soo looking forward to hearing more... Thank you for creating these characters and a new story for us to enjoy. ... Karen( phoenixrocks1 on twitter)

Love that the Cullen men call her princess. So sweet.

Interesting story.. I'd like to see where it goes

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Banana popsicles, orange crayons, jelly shoes, fucking this and Esme fucking that, blonde haired Bliss and blonde haired Alice and then there's Edward, all cool like.

And this story is rocking a foundation already.

Trip me along, a curtsey for you YellowBella.

xo

Oh I so love your story!

Wow I'm sooo loving how nice this story is I want more and can't wait for the next thurs update!

Thank you so much for this!

This is going to be a hard one, isn't it? They're both trapped in a vicious cycle. So cool that you two are writing together! Bring it on sisters!

Haha. I love Dusty already.

I can already tell this story is going to slay me..I can hardly wait for the update..Im loving this Edward and Bella..also Alice but your Carlisle slayed me..unnf...damn Esme.

loved this, i hope we keep getting long chapters since it feels like once a week is not enough! this charlie reminds me of my dad. dusty was a heartbreaker even back in the 6th grade. isabella bliss/princess pie - amazing. i loved the innocence in this chapter, what a difference from the prologue, before they were tainted. can't wait to see how they got there and what will happen after.