|Reviews for Dusty|
| Artsitina 12/30/11 . chapter 1
LOVE IT! Amazing work as always. ]
| SaphiraGoddess 12/30/11 . chapter 2
i feel like this may be the happiest chapter we would get until much later
i may obviously be wrong about that lol
loving this story so far
| tff000 12/30/11 . chapter 2
good chapter. liked seeing the young and what their relationship is like. interesting to have characters that are a bit different
| babygirl757 12/30/11 . chapter 2
Great Chapter! It was adorable to see Alice and Bella interacting as children. And to see the roles kinda reversed for a change. Bella being girlie and Alice being more of a Tom-Boy! I love it! Kiddie Edward is awesome too! Can't wait for more!
| michellecoldren 12/30/11 . chapter 2
I am so happy this story has finally gotten underway! I love both of your writing, so I am totally thrilled to read a joint endeavor! I am already in love. Thanks for writing and sharing.
| ksw3 12/30/11 . chapter 2
Awww! Sweet! Alice just cracks me up. Different as it seems Esme and Carlisle are not the perfect parents. I'm always scared to start WIP as it's just sad when they don't get finished but I have read all your others and trust you so here I am. Esme saying Fuck was just too funny! Good start to their story and you can already feel Edwards protectiveness for Bella. You always write bad boy Edwards... Luv them. Bella seems really girly instead of Tom boyish, Alice is the rough Tom boy here, could be a lot of fun as they get older. I'm soo looking forward to hearing more... Thank you for creating these characters and a new story for us to enjoy. ... Karen( phoenixrocks1 on twitter)
| chloe39 12/30/11 . chapter 2
Love that the Cullen men call her princess. So sweet.
| frankfart101 12/30/11 . chapter 2
Interesting story.. I'd like to see where it goes
| kroseph 12/30/11 . chapter 2
Banana popsicles, orange crayons, jelly shoes, fucking this and Esme fucking that, blonde haired Bliss and blonde haired Alice and then there's Edward, all cool like.
And this story is rocking a foundation already.
Trip me along, a curtsey for you YellowBella.
| beckybrandon 12/29/11 . chapter 2
Oh I so love your story!
| zkcej 12/29/11 . chapter 2
Wow I'm sooo loving how nice this story is I want more and can't wait for the next thurs update!
Thank you so much for this!
| 2loveybunnies 12/29/11 . chapter 1
This is going to be a hard one, isn't it? They're both trapped in a vicious cycle. So cool that you two are writing together! Bring it on sisters!
| EdwardCullenizor 12/29/11 . chapter 2
Haha. I love Dusty already.
| milicentforever 12/29/11 . chapter 2
I can already tell this story is going to slay me..I can hardly wait for the update..Im loving this Edward and Bella..also Alice but your Carlisle slayed me..unnf...damn Esme.
| giantasspanda 12/29/11 . chapter 2
loved this, i hope we keep getting long chapters since it feels like once a week is not enough! this charlie reminds me of my dad. dusty was a heartbreaker even back in the 6th grade. isabella bliss/princess pie - amazing. i loved the innocence in this chapter, what a difference from the prologue, before they were tainted. can't wait to see how they got there and what will happen after.