could you please write more of this?

i love this story,please update soon.

Update soon Please.

Dear Writer, I have been watching charmed since the first season aired and out of all my favorite character's Phoebe Halliwell is my favorite. You have done a wonderful job and i hope that you will continue the story please. Also I have been reading Charmed fan-fiction in general for a total of 3 years.

Sincerely, Your Number One Fan

Post more soon

i just read this whole thing and i love it, could you please continue it please!

very good! whana reade more about it.. ) so please hurry up!

I love it. There simply aren't enough Evil/Phoebe stories out there.

This is excellent! I've always liked the idea of Phoebe and Cole together. Please keep on writing. I can't wait to see the end.

This is a great story, it has an original idea and all the other things that great storys have.

Theres only two problems, stop writing The End in all the chapters and I have no idea of who to root for, Phoebe or Leo.

i must admit, i am enjoying this spin on phoebe's & cole's relationship...i'm a bit worried that leo's well aware that phoebe's on her way...in spite of her being evil, i hope nothing happens to her or the baby (or cole) in your universe...

Very well written, and you've fit it through the plotline perfectly! Just, please, stop writing "The End" at the end of each chapter. That drove me crazy. Good stuff, tho! _

Nice 1!

I cryed at end of Long Live the Queen, so thanx 4 changing it!

Cole_Lover

This is a great fic, but I was looking your other fics and I saw another one called Sweet Surrender:seduction or something like that... I'm sorry not to review in that story but I wasn't sure that you would read the reviews for it. Are you actually going to continue that storyline?

It's really good so far and now it's left on a cliff-hanger.

It's really interesting...even more so since the last season/ Could you please update? or if you can't update could you e-mail me to tell me what you were going to make happen?

thanks! ()

I thoroughly enjoyed Chapters 2 & 3, they were both very good. I hope you update with the next chapter soon.