|Reviews for The Feud|
| Uglybug 2/9/13 . chapter 1
I enjoyed your story very much. Except now I'm craving Mexican food. Thanks, kayaklady!
| BettiAnn 4/5/12 . chapter 1
Well done! I love how you have Mike telling the story to his grand and great grandchildren. Very nicely done.
| hibouperche 3/21/12 . chapter 1
This was a nice crossover. Lancer happens to be my favorite Western but I only have vague recollections of Laramie. I've probably seen it, though. I hope you will write more Laramie-Lancer stories. If you're not already on Lancer Writers, you should go. It's a great site with lots and lots of good stories and a few crossovers with Laramie and other Westerns. I'm sure the gals would love to see a new writer. See you there, maybe.
| sb4ever 12/26/11 . chapter 1
Loved, loved, loved this! Combining two favorite shows in one. This was absolutely wonderful!
I liked how you used Mike as the narrator and used his POV. It was an interesting perspective. You built the tension with all the little hints of gunfighting and a running feud and to end it like you did-masterful and totally unexpected.
THe only little bitty quibble I had is that after all those years the two men were still single! I'm absolutely positive at least Slim would've gotten married. Or, is that another story?
| Cruelest Sea 12/25/11 . chapter 1
Jess Harper and Johnny Madrid, two of my favorite cowboys! As an old fan of "Lancer" and a semi-old fan of "Laramie" I've been hoping for ages for someone to cross the two series. Very nicely done story; I enjoyed it.
I'd love to see some just "Lancer" stories from you in the future if you have any plans for them.:)
| Sun Rising 12/22/11 . chapter 1
That story was just swell...I loved it as I have truly developed a real interest in both Laramie and Lancer fanfic. I hope that we Laramie lovers continue to see the rise in really great fanfic writing. We are really developing a great talented bunch. I have really been impressed with the quality of Lancer fanfic. Thank you very much for your wonderful story.
PJoy in PA/"Sun Rising"