-blush blush- -giggle giggle- LOVES!

I really really adore this. Especially the whole style. The flow of Harry's narration to Draco's and back again. It was amazing.

I rather like this style of writing. It has a nice flow to it. It took a little while to get into the system, though. Maybe you could replace the hyphen with something a little clearer if you write more stories like this (which I hope you do).

since you NEED them I'll do one for you...

great story and i LOVE the way you write...

I adore what you have done with this story. The way you changed the POV added alot to the story for me, and i think the concept of Forbiden Fruit was a great way to convey the feelings they both would have when thinking about theyre feelings for eachother. Thank you it was an amazing read

Okay yes, it was weird, but I liked it ! :) I thought it was funny and kind of cute. But did they seriously have sex in the middle of the day by the lake ? XD

And btw, did I miss something in the books, because it always seems that Seamus and Dean are tagged together! Not that I mind. I think they're adorable. :)

Anywho. This is my longest review I've ever written. Sorry bout that. I liked the fic though!

Very good!

One critisism - It was confusing to figure out who was talking - harry, then draco, then harry, then draco - headache!

But seriously, that was my only problem with it - and it didn't matter!

5/5 :)

I like the way this story had both sides melting together by carrying off ideas from the same word

I liked it a lot :D

I love your transitions! Refreshingly well-written, and you paid due attention to grammar and spelling... thank you! My greatest pet peeves are those stupid authors who don't seem to care -or even know- proper writing. As a reader, I think it's absolutely essential to the flow of the story, so thank you for that. Ok, rant over. Good job.

Loved it!

odd is good. And i love the style!

the style which you wrote this fic was very interesting. i enjoyed it a lot. it flowed well and it was just great. different from the other h/d fics i've read and it was unique in a good way. :D

nice work! :D

wow that was super kewl.

I really like the style tha tyou wrote it in.

It was intresting.

I don't think that many others could pull it off.

that was good and rather cool

I love this... I came online at midnight looking for some GOOD Draco/Harry - you know, nowadays all H/D you find is some stereotypical shit. You saved my night. Thank you. *bows*

PS: I'd like to translate this fic into Finnish. Is that ok? Mail me please *points at her email address*