|Reviews for The Pain of Paperwork Two|
| MissDoctorDonna 2/1/13 . chapter 17
Oh lord no, not Ella. Please tell me that you're going to kill her me before she kills Chris after mating with him.
| MissDoctorDonna 9/18/12 . chapter 15
*claps hands happily* I LOVE the interaction between Chris, Ezra and Vin. Aww and when Chris broke down 'cos Buck didn't hug him... I wanted to hug him instead. Sandwiching him between Buck and Vin was a lovely visual. The boys retribution on Ezra's ex team mates was brilliant too. Thanks very much and I look forward to the next chapter.
| C.I.TigerFan 9/6/12 . chapter 1
Love your stories. Quick question, probably a dumb question, but what is WIP?
| MissDoctorDonna 9/2/12 . chapter 14
Oh gawd! My poor boys. Damn that evil nurse. You're going to make her and Mackenzie suffer, aren't you? Please say you are.
| MissDoctorDonna 9/3/12 . chapter 14
Oh GAWD! My poor, poor boys! I just want to cuddle Chris, but will have to be content with the other's doing it for me. Don't suppose you could have a touching moment or two between Vin, Ezra and/or Chris? Don't get me wrong, I love all the boys, but they're my favourites. Still loving your stories, so keep on typing.
| hotchner 8/23/12 . chapter 13
Hey thorsfriend, I am sorry that I have not read much of this story until you said you were
not getting many reviews. Well here is my review: I have loved the story all the way through
it. In this last chapter I hope that Chris will be alright and I hope that Buck will be able to help
him through his problem. I loved having Chris go through and let all the other Team get nailed.
I wish he would have been able to lay the head of the other side up in the hospital though. I
look forward to being able to read the next chapter. Thank You... Dawn(hotchner)
| MissDoctorDonna 8/23/12 . chapter 13
Oh lord, poor Chris. What's been done to him now and just how much more can he take?
| Jonnie Joke 6/7/12 . chapter 11
Aww i love the endding part that features the Seven standing up for each other! Oh and them taking of the drunk members which is adorable 3 Hope to see more soon, good job!
| MissDoctorDonna 3/5/12 . chapter 7
Arrrrgh! No, no, no, don't leave me hanging. I'm loving this story with the closeness you show between the boys, and the nurturing shown towards poor Chris. What has befallen the poor love now?
| R.I.Peace 3/3/12 . chapter 7
Just when you think he's getting better it sounds like the worse of it is about to happen. I hope he gets better and soon. Some of that fighting spirit is coming back and that should be a good sign, but then again...
| R.I.Peace 2/8/12 . chapter 6
Might be time for Chris openly grieve, could get better from there. Hope it does. He needs a break from his illness and the past.
| MarsPilot 1/16/12 . chapter 4
While you have a great plot the fact that you have not proof read your story before posting it takes away from your work. I would love to read this to the conclusion but will most likely not. If you get a Beta, or attempt to proof read (spell and grammar check at a minimum) I'll continue to read. Again, great plot and it would be an awesome story to read to the end.