I'm at a loss for words right now. That was just amazing.

I especially love the last four paragraphs. They're extremely poignant.

I don't know how to say what I want to, but that fic was really really good.

Really adds more pov to the end of that episode. Really well done.

Beautiful! You made excellent use of the graveyard scene and I loved the parallels with the play. Good job. :)

That was soo good. I loved that episode of Smallville! Lana realizes she likes Clark but it's too late. I'm sorry but I just have to say this: Every one on that show is a COMPLETE MORON! They are so dumb. I love it.

I really liked your story, it was insightful. Lana's inner turmoil was presented in a sympathetic way, and you didn't think she was a bitch because of her feelings. Well done, I commend your characterisation.

*sniffle* Never thought I'd ever say this, but...poor Lana. I love this. More?

Ah, now if only they'd give us this kind of development for Lana on the show... Very good work!

Really well-written. You did a great job in relating Lana's thoughts and providing the readers some great insight into the person she is... and the person she doesn't want to be. Stories like these, short or not, help make the character more "real" for us. I look forward to reading more work from you.

Really good. I like Lana and that last scene... It was a really good story, really captured Lana's character.

Oooo! That was really good! Sad too! I love the way you put in Lana's perspective! I'll say it again that was really good!

Tres good! Very deep, and makes a lot of sense! :D

good introspection

this isn't one of those one chapter things, is it? cause i'm dying to see who lana wants, or is going to be, now. please continue!

this is good