 Kitka 1/4/03 . chapter 1Cute but admittedly rather boring. |
 menyl 9/20/02 . chapter 1 it was good even though it was short with no storyline. You have talent. Write a real fic about Bob and Dot and I'll be the first to read it. |
 AvA-181 5/14/02 . chapter 1aahww yet another short and sweet one! love the wording you use! good sensory imputs for the reader. |
 Marmalade 5/13/02 . chapter 1 Hi sweetie! Very good, rather short though. Have a good day! |
 Alryssa 5/11/02 . chapter 1Of *course* it's suggestive, darling. But in the nicest possible way. ;-) |
 GeekRyuu 5/9/02 . chapter 1This fic is proof positive that a scene doesn't have to be long to be both detailed and incredibly good. This is sweet, plausible, and entirely in character for BobnDot...or it should be. (muttering)Stupid, stupid Season 4... Anyway, I positively adored this scene. Expand on it if you wish, but don't you dare change a single word of it. It's utterly perfect as it is. And like I said, you just keep getting better and better, girl! Keep up the awesome work! |
 ChybbySka7 5/9/02 . chapter 1 That was bery short, but incredibly sweeeeet! I just love sweetness! |
 Natgel 5/9/02 . chapter 1it was cute |
 KuraKathryn 5/9/02 . chapter 1Very nice. It's good to see a fic with no plot but still with a sweet interlude. I liked it. :) |
 Leivi 5/9/02 . chapter 1Awww so sweet, short yes but sappy enough to more than make up for it lol. |
 Brenren 5/8/02 . chapter 1Aw, that was so sweet. Very short, but sweet. I loved it. :) |
 trisanamcgraw 5/8/02 . chapter 1That was *very* short, Fidget! But I liked it. It was wonderfully cute - but a mere scene. Are you going to make it into a larger fic? ) |