|Reviews for After the Rescue|
| AlexaVolta 11/25/12 . chapter 1
Hello! Very intimate and well written. I like reading pieces like this that dwell a little more on how the characters have reacted to an event.
Only thing I would wish for is to hear a little more of the emotional thoughts and responses of Tarzan and Jane when they go to bed together at the end of the story. It's all very mechanical about him taking off layers of her clothes, but nothing about what either of them are thinking and feeling. I think that could add a lot to the story, to show how their relationship has changed since Tarzan's brush-with-death.
Other than that I thought it was a great little piece!
| Ladii Emelia 3/30/12 . chapter 1
Great job with this.