Heh. Most amusing, a take on the universe that I've never seen before. I also want to see the missing Smith/Neo section... NEVER too much S/N slash. Never, ever, ever. I'm adding this one to my Favorites list. Well done. :-)

::sniff:: I'm so upset

God that was depressing.

YAYYAYAYAY! Neo/Smith slash! *dances around making happy noises* This is such a cool, scary scenario... Yeah, I can see this happening. I can see this really happening. But I'd love to see what happens in the bedroom, too :D

Wow! That was really good! Their is NO way that you can start something like that an not add another part! Hurry and uplaod, I want to know what happens next! I hope that you will continuce this! Maybe that they cmoe back and Neo has to decide who he likes more...or something like that...or you can build on the relationship between Smith and Neo, or about how all four of them are really good freinds... This is a great, fic and I won't stop bugging you until you put up another part, or come up with a excuse for not! PLEASE! IT WOULD MEAN A LOT! I have been looking for this kind of story FOREVER, and it would stink if you were to leave it there, leaving the reader wanting more! PLEASE ADD MORE! PLEASE! PLEASE! I realy, realy hope that you do! PLEASE! You are such a great writer! At first I didn;t know what to think, but then I read this and you wrote it in a wonderful way! PLEASE ADD ANOTHER PART! PLEASE! thanks!

P.S. ,! Sorry 'bout all the threats...hehehe?

-.- SORRY!

Hurry with more, then e-mail me when you do! Thanks!

.GhostCat.

This is by far one of the best stories out here

It's very.. Bulgakov, like Master and Margareta

it's an angsty russian book, your writing style is similar

write more!

Pretty please?

With a chery on the top?

Despite its incredibly sardonic, apathetic, and twisted content (sexual and otherwise), this story was well written and highly amusing in a cynical way (just my style). I thouroughly enjoyed it, especially the image of the agents getting drunk off their asses and of Neo throwing Smith through a skyscraper. I didn't particularly enjoy the bit about Neo and Brown... but it was amusing in a sickening sort of way. The only thing i can find wrong with the style is that i think the agents would have still insisted on calling Neo "Mr. Anderson", and in his lackadaisical state Neo probably would've let them. At any rate, bravo! i

God that was depressing.

Wow. Wow. Wow. That was...wow. Utterly perfectly bizarre and different. I adore this little gem. It's throbbing with pain and it just feels invigorating in a depressing way, does that make sense? I really like this. Really really like this. And I've ALWAYS ALWAYS ALWAYS wanted to see someone put aliens in this cyberpunk tale. I have kept trying to figure out a SW/Matrix cross over (yeah, sounds horrible, i'll never do it, but I can imagine it) and your Vegans work well with that concept. ANYWAY, good work.

Wow. Sad and touching and humorous all at once. Though the premise sounds odd at first, I was totally drawn into it by Neo's understated narrative. Will there be more?

Holy ... moly! Ya could've warned me! Well, actually, the surprise was greater this way. ;) One in the eye for all of us who wanted the Smith/Trin ship (however angsty) to continue, right? Keep up the great work.

Oh, yes - I laughed out loud at Neo's line: "I distinctly remember throwing Smith through a skyscraper." :)

Wonderful stuff! A very good ending to the whole matter. And Neo and Smith... very cute :)