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| Reviews for E kala mai ia'u |
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   francis2 1/5/12 . chapter 5Poor Steve is wallowing in guilt now. Please write more. |
| Onthnis 1/4/12 . chapter 5 Your story continues to be amazing. Look forward to each and every chapter! |
| Qweb 1/4/12 . chapter 5 Poor Danny. Poor Steve. He should feel guilty. He shot his partner and missed his shot. Will Danny forgive him? Will Danny even wake up? Good story. |
| francis2 1/3/12 . chapter 4 Danny won't die, will he? Please don't! That was a great showdown! |
| Krishnaa 1/3/12 . chapter 4 WoW...! That's like totally awesome... please update soon... am sure steve's hurt too... and more than anything he'd go on a guilt trip... yeah,I need the next chapter uploaded quickly, please? |
| Onthnis 1/2/12 . chapter 4 Another fantastic chapter- totally loving this great story! |
| Iuliana 1/2/12 . chapter 4 I know I said it before but man this is such a cool idea for a story. This was my favorite chapter. Now we're getting to the good part. Next, chapter please. Pretty please:) |
| shirik 1/2/12 . chapter 4 holy MF! sorry but this was like a blow to the face! as a hurt steve fan i thank you kindly (akawrd!) for adding steve wumph! |
| Kilema 1/2/12 . chapter 4 Poor boys. I like this story very much. Hope you will update soon |
| LadyAilith 1/2/12 . chapter 4 I'm truly amazed that Steve was able to nullify Hank's plan to blow up the school. I'm so very sorry that he had to shoot Danny to do it though. I imagine that Steve's never going to hear the end of it! Is Danny in shock? Is that why he's unconscious? Why the heck aren't the EMTs standing by? He needs help right now! As for Steve - did he break his elbow or did he just thwack the nerve really hard when he dove for the dead man's switch? Either way, it's got to hurt pretty badly. Happy New Year to you as well! More soon, please? |
| JennyLovesU 1/2/12 . chapter 4 aww poor Danny, getting shot is bad, but getting shot by his own partner.. But love the story, thanks for uploading! |
| Felicity Gibbongobbin 1/1/12 . chapter 4 You are *not* allowed to play games with my heart like that! Poor Danny! Poor Steve! It's so sad :( THis chapter was amazing, I loved every bit of it... OK, that was a lie. The ending was all, HOMG O.o Please post again soon, I can't wait :P |
| Qweb 1/1/12 . chapter 4 Steve shot his partner on purpose and not how he meant to either. I'm not sure I understand what Steve intended since you didn't specify that, say, the bullet was supposed to go through Danny and hit Hank in the leg. Whatever, he blew it though he did stop the bomber. |
| neptune60 1/1/12 . chapter 4 Steve did the only thing he could to save Dannys life and all Danny can do is mock him. Steve must be feeling bad enough without Danny saying that he is the one who killed him. I really don't get Danny sense of humor at times or whatever that speech to Steve was all about. |
| Onthnis 12/30/11 . chapter 3 Fantastic installment! Just love this story... |
