This is hilariouuuus! I totally love it!
...Why do I laugh too hard when reading some of your stories? :D

hervissa

I love it! Great job!

OMFG...*laughs* awkward Bellatrix and suave Voldy? Why yes please I think I've died and gone to HP Heaven...

I loooved this XD

Thank you for sharing, it made my day :)

I love Bellatrix and I love Voldemort's reaction!

XXX

Lol! XD yes, they definitely shouldn't use cheesy pick-up lines. good job! :D

Haha, nice work _

Hahaha, I love your beginning author's note to this. I think you worked the pick-up line in well, it didn't sound crack fic-y it at all.

Lol. You were right, Bellatrix and Voldemort should not use cheesy pick-up lines! Haha. Very funny and creative story though. I especially liked that Voldemort didn't get it at first. Your grammar was great, as always. Very nice job :)