How on earth could I have missed this gem? I thought I had read everything of Mizvoy's except the epics (which I promise to get to at some point).

In any case, this was a wonderful and much-needed "missing scene" from the whole Equinox disaster. You write J/C so beautifully and provide us a look into the dynamics of their relationship as no other can.

This should of been in the episode, I always felt the they left some of the emotions out (except for Night maybe).

Ah, good! i always value in-character writing, which is not that easy to come by. I salute you, Mizvoy.

Very true how they balance each other out. Well written; you stayed in character for both of them. I like it!

Better and Better and better.

Another delight. I'm still shaking my head at how well you know these characters, how instinctively you know exactly what would come out of their mouths. It is truly amazing and I enjoy it tremendously!

Camryn

*Applauds*

Nice.

Sorry that the reviews are crappy from me, but it's late and I'm too lazy to write.

pol

Mizvoy, you are such an excellent writer. You've got some really great ideas and this story... it's definately an excellent one. It was a fine addition to the episode, "Equinox".

An excellent addition to Equinox. I never bought that a quip about croutons would seal the rift between Janeway and Chakotay. This is much more believable.

I luv your story. its 2 gd 4 words. need i say more? :):D

awww vera vera cute

What a wonderful story! Great idea, and great writing.. :)