|Reviews for Arcadian Wedding|
| SPG inc 2/19/12 . chapter 1
Nice little onshot. Why haven't I reviewed this before?
Cute with Fina; good thing you didn't name her fiance, or he'd be on my hit list for coming between her and Vyse ;)
| Martin III 1/7/12 . chapter 1
A very nice quickie. While the theme of a faux romantic consummation between the main characters is over-familiar from "Forbidden Fruit" and "Vyse's Choice", there's considerably more to this story than that bit of trickery. (Besides, I have to admit I got a childish kick out of the "YIP"ing.)
Vyse and Fina sleeping together is quite cute, and the little discussion of their pasts feels as natural as it is heartwarming. The line "well, I couldn't refuse since she never asked."" adds a non-intrusive humorous note to the scene as well.
I have to say that I'd been expecting more after a year, but this is still a good piece of fanfic.