That's very... romantic. In a kinda twisted way.

I really like it _

well that was interesting XD

This is the very first Miyu fic I've read and I love it! This was very well written and actually gave me goosebumps LOL. Great job!

Kewl. Melikes a lot.

Very nice. You put things very simply, so simply that it is almost chilling at times. It's something that I very much wish I could do, and the effect it has on the story is almost disturbing. (In a good way.) Terrific!

Your CCS story is in the Vampire Miyu section, you might want to move it where it's meant to be. Anyway I happen to be a CCS fan too and, it's nice.

lovingly written details.. ahh, i am so lucky! :) in fact, i had to read that first sentence twice to visualize it properly. heeee but it was nicely written. thank you much! are you going to write more? (hmmm.. although it's good by itself even if you decide not to..)