I loved this story could you please complete it so i can know what happens.

Nice plot development.

well a prophecy whit an interesting content, well a great chapter and interesting

Again I wish I had your imagination when it comes to creating the inner world between the episodes/comic issues. I always enjoy cross over fics that introduce me to a series I wouldn't otherwise have given consideration.

ouch, wow looks like the huntsclan is a really nice bunch, on the same page as the SS and the Nazis. well it was good and it's nice to hear from you. well there is some critic, the problem is the speech i could barley distinguish the speech from the text you should use "" for sentences. but other than that well done

nice story and good introduction chapter.

well another good chapter, and very nice background history. however please use "" for direct speces, cause it's very difficult to understand the text whitout them. especially as i'm not a born english speaking person

well interesting intro for a hopeful interesting and good story.

Patricia Ann Carter? Is that her real name?