This was a very sweet story. The dialogue was really great, and there was a good mix of humor, suspense, and drama. Nice work.

That was a fantastic story. I love the scene where they are in the deliver room and she grabs Flint. I started to laugh and it made me think of when I was delivering my daughter and the stuff I did to my husband.

I should have done my research before I asked for a Marissa story. Thanks. I think the dialog between Flint and Lady Jaye is quite good, lots of laughes, and realistic. Where did James come from?

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Don't know why I never read this. oh yeah.. wasn't around for it. It's really sweet. You should write more of this stuff. Totally different read and enjoyable.

I love this story, it is so different from the blood and guts shoot-em up ones. Thanx for writing it, it's great!