 nejitenfan 5/7/12 . chapter 4please update |
 rogue-scholar07 12/13/11 . chapter 4You should totally continue this, if you haven't forgotten about this story... I'm thoroughly intrigued by it. |
 dispatcher652 4/13/09 . chapter 4I was really starting to get into this story. I hope you come back and revist it. I love stories about Flint and Lady Jaye and I think that there should be more of them. I really wanna see if they will catch who hurt Jaye and if she will ever tell Flint herself. |
 Charlemagne20 6/17/02 . chapter 19 This was a truly great story with a wonderfully happy ending. I truly enjoyed the search into Lady Jaye's past as conducted by Flint and Duke along with the terrible heart rending emotion of all the parties involved. I furthermore want to comment that the scene where "admiral nevens" was shot was superbly well done...glad he got what he deserved. The resulting political and economic controversy that was resolved by the last minute help of General Flagg was a very cool godsend as well. The situations changed a bit fast but I did like the romance enough that I was able to ignore the Michael father bit which fell flat for me I'm sorry to say. All in all a fantastic story here and one I hope you'll find my works as good as |