| Reviews for No One Mourns the Wicked |
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starlight.moon.princess 5/8/13 . chapter 1this is gorgeous :3 in my mind, the unnamed man is harry, because he's the only i can see doing this for the fallen villains. i loved your descriptions of the dead. [He never tried to be someone he wasn't] this is a gorgeous description of all that snape was. because no matter how much of an ass he was, he was the only person in the series who was completely truthful about the type of person he was. he was the only one who never pretended and hid himself just to fit into society's mould, and that makes him so much stronger than anyone else could be. a lot of people forget that no one is born evil, and there's no way bella was all evil either. evil doesn't love, and she loved voldemort with all that she had. barty's piece is beautifully bittersweet, because he was driven insane by his father, the person who should have protected him but instead ignored him. and then the end. the end is gorgeous. [Tom Riddle died Lord Voldemort – but, in the end, he was still just a mortal man. No matter how hard he tried to be infinite, he was as finite as anyone else.] This line is perfect and really, really shows that tom was person juts like everyone else. this was gorgeous :3 |
earlyable 8/15/12 . chapter 1Love it. |
Guest 8/10/12 . chapter 1 I really like this story but in My head its not Harry , i cant think its Harry |
Jessie'sgirl 4/9/12 . chapter 1 That was amazing. It brought a tear to my eye. Someone mourns the wicked, and that someone is me. |
aaliona 2/20/12 . chapter 1I assume the man is Harry. If it is, that makes the story all the more bittersweet. It's nice to think that someone cares, even if few fans even do. |
chewinggumandpencils 2/20/12 . chapter 1This is really touching. I think you captured these moments really well. There were one or two errors, the most notable in the beginning where you meant "or" and said "of". A few of your sentences are phrased a little awkwardly, but it doesn't take away from the story. It really makes you wonder who it is that is doing that (in my head, it's Harry). I think that you could have gone more in-depth into the emotions of the person doing this (even if it's not Harry, those sites would mean a lot to anyone who knows enough about the wicked to do this). I think that the Bellatrix section was the best. I also liked the repetition of "Someone has to mourn the wicked." It really added a lot to your story. Good job! |
HeadlessHuntsman 2/17/12 . chapter 1I liked this a lot. Though you never say it I like to think the person doing the mourning is Harry. If it was meant to be then it is just so like him to mourn even those who died fighting against him. One mistake it in the opening paragraph you write: Very few have ever of will ever hail Severus Snape as a hero. I think you left out some words or put in some wrong ones. Other than that it was awesome. |
a 2/5/12 . chapter 1 that is the deepest think i have ever read |
Mai Ascot 1/8/12 . chapter 1I was already crying from the Seven Survivors but now I am in floods of teArs :'( |
Mr Bellatrix Lestrange 1/4/12 . chapter 1Ooh so they're all, knights, is it? Lovely :) |
avatarluv97 12/29/11 . chapter 1Mysterious...I LOVE it. You do beautiful work (And I'm not just saying that ;D) The song fits so well, and the fact that you didn't reveal the mourner made it fit even better. |
Marauder-In-Disguise 12/26/11 . chapter 1Brilliant - I like it very much :D If the mourner had been female I would have said it was Luna, but as it is I can only speculate...although I know who I would like it to be. Anyway, that's not important - what is important is that this is really touching. Well done :D |
ml101 12/25/11 . chapter 1This is beautiful! I wonder who the mourner is... |
nat 12/24/11 . chapter 1 I really liked the story...i just wished that you gave me a clue to who it was, but i can live without knowing. great job! |