Oh, this fanfic is so good! Kimblee is just amazing here and Winry is charming as well. Please, keep doing a good job!

I'm liking it so far, hope you choose to continue soon.

Oh, I'm glad you updated! If Kimbley goes after Al, I don't know if Ed could take it. Then again, I don't think Kimbley quite realizes how formidable Ed and Winry can be. I'm still very interested in this story! :)

I really like this story so far! Awesome idea. Looking forward to more:)

Hey! This is really good! I can't believe it took me so long to give this story a try. This AU fits so well with the characters, and it's just too easy to picture them in these roles. Kimbley's perfect as a mafia man. Mustang and Co. are great as police officers, and Ed fits in there very well as a noble but hotheaded street fighter.
Poor Winry, Ed, and Al! The worry that Ed and Winry show for Al is so heartwrenching. Just please, please tell me Ed isn't going to do anything totally stupid! *sigh* He is, isn't he.
Please continue!

That's an interesting dynamic set up with Ed/Win and the bits of this universe that are filtering through. It's tough to tell who is in more need of help!

I love this idea! And this chapter title 3 one thing I didn't quite understand, why exactly is Kimblee threatening Winry?

Man oh man... Kimbley doesn't know the can of hell he's about open up messing Edward when it comes to Winry.

this is going well. I wonder if you're going to involve any pairings? *hopes* I like Mafia AUs, and this goes TOO well with Kimblee.

interesting start!