Yes, I did read the whole thing, and here's my review, which I sincerely hope does not offend you in any way:

1) The Sandman was handled very well, especially in that laboratory fight with Spidey, where he got the hero stuck halfway in.

2) I think you might have forgotten that this fic is set in the Movieverse, and thus the Vulture really wouldn't be going around in his god-awful costume without a serious revamp. For example, see the movie versions of the Goblin and Doc Ock.

3) Brock may be a loser, but he isn't TOO stupid, though you did fairly okay with him.

That's basically it, and like I said, sorry if this angers you, but different people have different tastes, right? Have fun writing regardless of my words.

very good story, you seem to know your super-villains. you do know, however, spidey's webs come out of web-shooters he invented?

yeah for happy endings! Exceptionally well done!

Hey there KD - when I posted the ending, I realised I hadn't put up and explanation for spidey running out of webbing. I modified the chapter and put up an explanation now - it's organic webs, but he doesn't have an unlimited supply and needs to replace the proteien he uses up...

One of the best Spider-Man fics I've ever read. It was excellent. Congrats. (Make a sequel?)

Nice ending, but how did Spidey run out of web? Doesn't make sense, but then again there may be something in the comics that I missed, like a limited amount of webbing or something that wasn't in the movie. Anywho, good job on the story, can't wait for your next one!

krystaldragon

This just gets better and better. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Nice! You've updated. Thanks for tying up the whole Brock sub plot. He was really starting to annoy me. Still loving the story. Keep writing!

Hi Everyone, thanx for all the reviews - I'll keep updating regularly.

REM - Eddie Brock is one messed up guy - he's violent by nature and also has alcohol and drug problems. He's trying to burn down the Bugle because he feels Jonah had no right to treat him the way he did. He just cracked. It's in his nature... Hope that clarifies it a bit?

Thanx for reading!

I see you are devloping some of the other soon to be villians, but why was he trying to burn down the Bugle. Hurry with the next chapter.

Kewlies.. You know how much I LOVE fics like this one? GOOOOOOOOODDDDDD... hehe. Don't mind me, too much caffine and not enough sleep, don't ask. Anywho, gread ficcy, you continue soon, I hope?

krystaldragon

Kewlies.. You know how much I LOVE fics like this one? GOOOOOOOOODDDDDD... hehe. Don't mind me, too much caffine and not enough sleep, don't ask. Anywho, gread ficcy, you continue soon, I hope?

krystaldragon

i like it! keep going

This is one amazing story can't wait for more.

Oooh! You keep doing these cliffhangers. Evil! I look forward to the next part. So when is MJ going to smack Peter upside the head?