Excellent insight into Vejiita's character.

very nice. I love these introspective Vegeta POV pieces, particularly post-Buu when he's coming to grips with his new self.

Vegeta's mind was so well described, it was a wonder...

Not too kind, not too rough, a perfect balance.

I thought your penname sounded familiar and now I know why - you wrote a couple of my very favorite Invisible Man fics! And this one, as well, is an utterly beautiful story - perfect characterizations, spot-on character interactions, wonderful descriptions. ^_^

I liked how you stayed in one form. Well done!

vERY GOOD!kEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Oh wow! That was soo good! I absalutly adored it! You are an excellent writer! No really ! I mean it! I was totally engrossed with the story and couldn't take my eyes off of it until I got to the end.

Groovy

Awesome fic. I actually read this on your site a few days ago. I'm glad you put it up...it's very good. This was a very nice look into Vegeta's mind...something very few people can actually write about.

that's so sweet. also well written and they're not OOC. very good! you should write more!

Fantastic piece of fanfic here. Keep up the good work.

This is the first good Vegita fic I've read in a long time. Keep it up!

Beautiful story! Very well written. ^_^

Wow... Great stuff. I like it alot.