That was somewhat awkward bt rather funny.

Very romantic! Be careful with your grammar and spelling, but other than that, it was a great story!

Another chapter would be heavenly! I want to know how everyone reacts and how things change!

It's a nice story but it's too short. Hope you will make another fic or make a continuation for this story!

that is a very ood fic if a littel wierd there at the end but still good _

.. you'll write a sequel if you got enought review? AWW! thats not fair, we can't review more than once! wahhhhhh. I want Toya x Yue! PLIZZZZZZZZZZ *cry LOUDLY* See my nick? am a huge fan of those , do a sequel... *puppy eyes*

Aa, very kawaii ficlet, you have. There should be more TouyaYue/Yukito fics. :)

My pointers are small, but they mean alot when in a story as thus:

· -Spelling is always important for understanding exactly what you're talking about. And chronic perfectionists often have a difficult time following the story when they see spelling errors (we keep thinking: that isn't spelled right, that isn't spelled right, that isn't spelled right, etc. etc.) Spelling is good for clarifying thought, and less confusion.

· -Grammer is EXTREMELY important, and again, people with the CPS (chronic perfectionist syndrome), and some normal humans find it extremely difficult to understand phrases and sentences when the words make little sense. O_o And sentences like "Am going there tomorrow." are irksome beyond all extent. Try: "I am going there tomorrow." or something odd.

· -Symbols are a must. It was almost impossible for me to under stand your :: system with thinking. _ I was very confused. Perhaps in the future, you could find a way to simplify it somewhat? Please...?

Though, your story and everything else was seemingly excellent! I loved your story and enjoyed reading it very much, but with CPM, I am forced to drag out even the smallest errors I find. -_-;; Sorry. I loved your story, though; I hope to read more TY work by you someday! :)

Ah mush, sap, goo, SWEEEEEEEEET!

Good on you Touya for helping Yue out with his little confession.

Very well written.

Clow'd9

I like this fic, and th8is is going to be a GREAT review, becuase the idea behind it's very nice, [twiddles thumbs] what's the chances of you turning it into a series fic, with lotsa chapters? [grins] Please!

Thank you for writing this, we need more YTY fics desperately! _

You, my dear friend, are having way too much fun with the author's notes! Cheating and manipulating so Yue, Touya and Yuki all love you...tsk tsk...Remember, Yue's MINE!I'll let you have Touya, but the angel is MINE! Thanks for the reviews, I'm glad you like Nikki (My nickname for Nickoli). I loved the cute little way Yuki called Yue moon angel and Yue called Yuki snow bunny, that was sweet. I like your Yuki/YuexTouya, it's very sweet and fun to read, not, um...naughty...like mine can be! Great job, I L-O-V-E it!

Dark Ice Angel

Not a bad fic it was very romantic. if it were only a little longer it would have been the best fic i ever read