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amazingtofu 12/29/11 . chapter 1
It's beautiful how much Katie is willing to sacrifice for her siblings. It's the sort of thing people like to think they'd be willing to do. And she was put in a bad situation and she made the best of it.

I like how she doesn't feel guilty about the stealing, just guilty when her siblings are hungry. They came first.

And how when she goes to fight, she makes sure her siblings were taken care of. There was no, running out ready to fight. It was, I'll fight, but first here's what you need to know, Lucy.
yellow 14 12/28/11 . chapter 1
Brutal and brilliant. Keep writing
Ansa88 12/26/11 . chapter 1
oh my merlin. i can't even imagine doing this...but i think i'd do it for my sibs. definitely.

what a sad world this is...my gods.
WishingOnAFallenStar17 12/26/11 . chapter 1
It's really sad- after everything she went through to keep her family safe, she never got to see it through. Did Walter survive? The last line was really deep. Loved this story.

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