I have been reading fics on here for a while now and I jsut found this one. It made me cry. I have read fics that say they are tearjerkers. And I have never cried but I cried over this one. A really good story!

...Whoa...

wow...

That was such a wounderful poem. It's so powerful. The sad factor is huge.

*sniff* you made me cry.( wow, that was good! pls write the story, really want to know what hapend. (i'm just diggin' my own garve here, huh? ;).

Fanfic rarely gives me these little choking almost-sobs. In fact, it *never# has, until now. Dear Lord, girl, you stop writing and the world will stop spinning. Or something. Listen to me! you made me all emotional and melodramatic, and, *deep breath*. Ok. Good job, keep it up, and try and write some more SG1, ok? Pleease?

Phew! Emotionally draining! In other words, my friend, you did a most excellant job! I feel as if I lost my two best friends. Since I have lost loved ones, I understand the suffocating feeling that you managed to capture on paper. I did not understand one part, though. The part where you said that one turned on the other. What did you mean? Very good writing! Mary Lou.