Good Story so far. I mostly liked the part about Renka fighting Miu. I look forward to your third chapter and I hope you open and close it with some funny conversion like for the first two chapters.

hope miu forgives kenichi omega huntdown the author omega: okay

Sorry that it took me so long to get back to you! Here's my review of your story:

You capture the character's essences well. You make sure to span out the main character's thoughts well and there aren't many breaks in the flow of the writing. Might I suggest you secure the help of a beta reader to edit your story prior to your posting them?

A good story overall that I hope you complete. Til next time,

X.K.

A very impressive start. Continue to update. I'm tired to seeing all those Kenichi fanfics that remain unfinished.