Dang great poem. Dang dang dang. Frikken' great. Loved it.
"Here there be red eyes
Laughing demonspawn
Here there be the tempest storm
And the crimson dawn"
Remy, Betsy and Storm, right?

Seriously, I just can't believe it sometimes when I stumble across seriously great authors on . I don't understand why your work doesn't get more attention; you are a phenomenal writer. You have that whole "chilling and melancholy" thing down, and more than just melancholy, also "gut-wrenchingly depressing." But in a good way. And you're also good at the non-depressing stories, like "Cold." In fine, you're amazing, and I bow down to you.
"Here there be your parents,
Screaming, swallowed by the earth."
Shivers.

Y'all should really make a story out of this! ( two questions: Was rogue the one with the blood in her hair, and was gambit the devil's spawn! couse if he was...:[

Neat.

Confusing but I love it anyway.

Excellent!

Dark, but good. Have you thought about making a story from it? It would be very interesting. I'd read it. Just a thought. Keep writing. Sara V.

My arm itches, but great poem! Yer ol' pal, The Bud.